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A stream-of-consciousness novel by Elspeth Duncan
Wednesday, May 26, 2010
Daisy Chain: Videos, Extracts, Readers Comments
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Sunday, May 23, 2010
Extracts from DAISY CHAIN
Extract from MRS. MARTIN
It didn't matter that he was so much older. It didn't matter that he looked as if he had been pieced together from assorted domestic items (ears like teapot handles, nose like a cup hook, teeth like discoloured piano keys). Martin was the first person who had ever been kind to her. She began to think that maybe this was what Love could be.
Every lunchtime he would ride his black bicycle over to the library (where she worked as a horn-rimmed, hair-bunned librarian) to bring her a special treat from the bakery for dessert:
Monday: custard bun
Tuesday: vanilla donut dusted with cinnamon
Wednesday: batch of star-shaped coconut cookies sprinkled with little coloured dots
Thursday: melt-in-your-mouth chocolate brownie
Friday: cheese twists and lemon-filled drops
After work, he would ride back to the library to meet her. He would push his bicycle along beside them as he walked her home. Three miles is far to trek with arthritic knees, but she was worth the pain.
At the time she lived alone in a small apartment on the second floor of an unpainted four-storey building in a rough neighbourhood, Martin called it. Young men loitered by the corner, streetlights did
not work, garbage stank to high heavens and rats the size of puppies frequently ran across the road. Eitherthat, or they sat heavily on the steps, like pets waiting for their owners.
Saturday, May 22, 2010
Some Comments from Readers and Viewers
I feel like an addict ... every day I hurriedly check my email for Daisy Chain updates. My only complaint is that the excerpts are too short. That's because I'm greedy. I get reading and don't want to stop. Great great great ... I can't wait for it to be launched.
Comment via email from recipient of daily email extracts - Virma B., Ottawa, Canada ***
I like all the descriptive passages here which is just about every single line you wrote! You are good at so many things. This is terrific writing ... it really draws me. Thanks for sending.
Comment via email from recipient of daily email extracts - Lynn, California
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You are a talented writer. In just the space of these brief extracts, you create an unsettling ambiance, real characters about whom we are at least curious, and you hook the reader. I can't wait to read the book and see if you sustain these effects consistently. I enjoy your style, particularly the way you parenthetically insert information. It creates an ostensibly relaxed atmosphere in contrast with an underlying tension.
Comment from recipient of daily email extracts: Jeanne Mason, co-editor Trinidad Noir***
I haven't read a novel in many years now as I've been following my urge to explore psycho/spiritual material. So this is the first novel I am experiencing in a long time and with only the first two extracts I'm delighting in the way the words and images play out and that it's from your stream of consciousness. Thanks for sharing!
Comment from recipient of daily email extracts: Vanessa Soodeen, Spain
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If this book has a colour, it is yellow, like the sun, like the hearts of the daisies on the cover, like promises. If it has a mood, it is of longing, searching, of hopeful expectancy. The women here think, listen, wonder, seek, explore, embrace. Go at this smorgasbord at your own pace - savour each titbit as it is presented or gobble them up like I did, only to go back and sample again the ones that struck and need some careful chewing over.
Review from award-winning writer Barbara Jenkins (Trinidad) who has read the whole book****
"Oh Gad!!!!!!"
Comment via email from recipient of daily email extracts - Patrice Charles - after reading the extract from Myrna Christie.
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Elspeth... I love your words. I closed my eyes and listened to Carolyn, and the beauty & lyricism of the words and phrases became apparent. They reminded me of a meditation. The pictures that you created in my mind elicited a visceral response... I enjoyed the entire experience. Thank you.
D. Nanton, Canada (after viewing video of reading of ANDREA)
Thursday, May 20, 2010
Videos of Readings from DAISY CHAIN
Rhoda Bharath gives introductory talk at launch of Daisy Chain
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Elspeth Duncan, author of Daisy Chain, gives a short intro prior to the readings
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Carolyn Harnanan reads ANDREA (from Daisy Chain)
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Carol Hosein reads FIONA (from DAISY CHAIN)
Patti-Anne Ali reads an extract from MONA (from DAISY CHAIN)
Vanessa Duncan reads an extract from PHILLIPINE (from DAISY CHAIN)
Joann Ali-Nandalal reads an extract from LUCY